About My Writing From my Best Friend

I am writing from last 1.5-2 years.

Generally, I share only some of my posts with my friends and people directly connected with me.

And most of them don’t know about my writing.

But, I am sharing some of my articles and poems with friends and family members.

Generally, over here everyone appreciate if they like what we write.
But no one will point out where we need to improve upon.

So, last night we friends met after long time and they knows now that I am writing.
One of my friend told me about my writing and where I need to improve.

She told me that

”

As, I have read some of your article, I understood that

your thought process and thought pattern is very nice.
The sequence in which you can think is good, I can understand what you write as I know how you are thinking and what you want to say with the words in the article. But, some one who don’t know you personally may interpret it different because sometimes your writing sequence gets change. The another thing she told is you need to improve your vocabulary

”

So, It was valuable feedback for me.

But, now it’s your turn.

Please, be open and give me suggestions where I need to improve. What can help me improve my writing.

Please, please give some inputs for me
Thanks in advance 🙂