About My Writing From my Best Friend

I am writing from last 1.5-2 years.

Generally, I share only some of my posts with my friends and people directly connected with me.

And most of them don’t know about my writing.

But, I am sharing some of my articles and poems with friends and family members.

Generally, over here everyone appreciate if they like what we write.
But no one will point out where we need to improve upon.

So, last night we friends met after long time and they knows now that I am writing.
One of my friend told me about my writing and where I need to improve.

She told me that

As, I have read some of your article, I understood that

your thought process and thought pattern is very nice.
The sequence in which you can think is good, I can understand what you write as I know how you are thinking and what you want to say with the words in the article. But, some one who don’t know you personally may interpret it different because sometimes your writing sequence gets change. The another thing she told is you need to improve your vocabulary

So, It was valuable feedback for me.

But, now it’s your turn.

Please, be open and give me suggestions where I need to improve. What can help me improve my writing.

Please, please give some inputs for me
Thanks in advance 🙂

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6 Comments Add yours

  1. crystalamay says:

    I think more concentration on grammer side I guess,actually same with me too,I too need to concentrate on it more.

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    1. Divyang Shah says:

      Okay. I will focus.. Thanks for suggestion

      Liked by 1 person

  2. TalkaholicMe says:

    If you want to improve your writing, then write about something you have never written before.. For e.g. politics, poem, lifestyle, sports.. When you’ll write out of your league, you’ll understand your pattern better..

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Divyang Shah says:

      Okay! This is something that I haven’t think on. But, today only I have written something for someone that I wrote for the first time.. I will write something different now.

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    2. Divyang Shah says:

      Thanks for advice, falak 🙂

      Liked by 1 person

  3. Janice Wald says:

    Hi Divyang,
    I know Roberta and Talkaholic.
    That was nice of you to nominate Roberta for an award.
    I met you at Roberta’s blog party.
    Maybe you can check out my blog if you need a blogging tip or two. That’s what I write about.
    Janice

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